Write a single scene that uses rich description to build suspense. Your scene should include a character who is tempted to act impulsively.

This writing assignment focuses on the following skills:

Using language to convey a vivid picture to the reader
Using imagery to create and develop suspense
Using description to convey a particular feeling
You should have completed a draft of this assignment in the activity before this one. If you haven't done so, go back and complete that activity now.


Ask yourself these questions as you revise:

Did I use vivid imagery that connects to the senses?
Did I use details to create suspense?
Did I consider building tension by sharing the character's thoughts or worries?
Did I consider building tension by using dramatic irony?
Did I write a single scene, not a whole story?
Did I write up to the moment of highest tension (the climax) and stop there?

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Answer 1
Is there a paper I can see the question on?
Answer 2

Answer:

1. We heard a noise from the room, which was known as the "haunted room", and for a moment, we all froze. I was usually not moved by fear easily, so I immediately tried to excuse it.

2. We had a moment of awkward silence before we decided to check it out. Alex and I had barely moved two steps when the lights of the house immediately went off and we began to hear the rustle of leaves.

3. We brought out our flashlight and when we turned towards the exit door, we saw an unrecognizable creature with bloodshot eyes. We immediately screamed at the top of our lungs and ran away.

4. Within the shadows, it hid its figure from view, jumping from crevice to corner in order to hide itself. Then there came a heavy-looking silhouette in the distance. Was it the sky? Some unusual sort of thunder? No, it wasn't, for the skies were clear of any clouds or covering of any sort. The road? No, we were hundreds of miles away from the road. The seas, perhaps? But no, this threatening sound came not from any natural, worldly being or phenomenon. Rather, as it was soon revealed by the rough green eyes and pale white face that were closing in on us, the sound came from the hate-filled diabolical creature!

Explanation:

I thought the assignment was kind of short, so I did a couple of different examples :)


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Bullet-pointed summary of ideas Nature book by Ralph Waldo Emerson?

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Answer:

Bullet - pointed Summary :-

In Nature, Emerson lays out and attempts to solve an abstract problem: that humans do not fully accept nature's beauty. He writes that people are distracted by the demands of the world, whereas nature gives but humans fail to reciprocate.

Emerson now tackles the difficult question of subjective truth and the impossibility of verifying the truth of external reality. It is not possible to prove absolutely that what our senses perceive is real. The average person — Emerson uses the carpenter as one example of such a person — doesn't want to know that what he thinks is real might be an illusion. However, whether or not nature exists as something distinct from ourselves remains definitively unanswerable.

After declaring that it makes no difference whether external reality exists or not, Emerson begins his discussion of idealism. His first point concerns visual changes and distortions caused by mechanical apparatuses, or by our physically changing the way we interact with our environment. These changes and distortions emphasize the separation between ourselves and nature, a separation that produces wonder and provides us with a sense of our own stability. We come to believe that although the world around us changes, in part due to our causing it to, we stay constant. As Emerson notes, "We are not built like a ship to be tossed, but like a house to stand."

Overall, Emerson asserts the power and importance of ideas. Again using a circle to symbolize the interrelated universe of people and nature, he emphasizes that the universal ideas grounding us in this world are products of a Supreme Being. A person who contemplates universal ideas gains new heights of understanding and, according to transcendental philosophy, transcends time and space to attain a metaphysical consciousness and immortality.

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examples of poor reading skills​

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Answer:

here

Explanation:

• What did Reverend Parris see that makes him suspect the cause of Betty's illness to be
witchcraft?

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When Goody Nurse stood over her, she quieted.

______the rain stopped, we ran outside to play Capture the Flag.

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Because the rain stopped, we ran outside to play Capture the Flag.

The Enlightenment
What is time of this period?
What is the big ideas?
Who was in that period?
If you and answer my question, i'll give you 5 stars and a heart.
if your answer not correct, i mean just answer to get score, i'll report you.
( You can search it, just because i'm lazy to read it. )
Thank you very much!

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Answer:

The enlightment period was a period where they used science & reasoning instead of the lord to solve life's problems.

Explanation:

Question answers

- 1. -

  The time of the period was in the 1700s/ 17th & 18th century

- 2. -

  The big ideas in the enlightenment was about government and how it should run.

- 3. -

  John Locke, Baron de Montesquieu, Jean-Jacques Rousseau.

 

Do you think Miss Sullivan was a good teacher? Why?

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Answer:

yes!

Explanation:

They show bravery and perseverance at difficult times

Answer: Who is this person o-o

How can we see the actions/behaviors/theme of “my soul it’s too much charged with the blood of thine already” in society today

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Answer:

PFFT whatever this is, it looks hard

Explanation:

Sorry, I'm just stoopid, and I really do apologize if I'm annoying you

on the tenth day of christmas, what does my true love give to me?

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Ten lords a leaping :)

"Roars, Snorts and … Infrasounds?.

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Answer:

hums? or is this asking if these are an infrasound than no

Explanation:

because the sound has to extend below the range of human hearing (from 20 Hz down to 0.001 Hz)

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I. Combine each pair of sentences ,using “enough”: “too”
1. He is strong. He can carry these boxes.
…………………………………………
2. She is very beautiful. She can take part in a beauty contest
…………………………………………
3. Mr.Brown is poor. He can’t buy a house.
…………………………………………
4. Those bananas are green. You can’t eat them.
…………………………………………
5. The weather was fine. We could go camping.
…………………………………………
6. The questions are difficult. The students can’t answer them
…………………………………………

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Answer:

1. He is strong enough, he can carry these boxes

2. She is very beautiful too, she can take part in a beauty contest

3. Mr. brown is poor enough, he can't buy a house

4. Those bananas are green enough, you cant eat them

5. The weather was fine too, we could go camping

6. The questions are difficult enough, the students can't answer them

I'm not too sure about question 4 &5 but others you should be good.

seat belts increase chance of survival by what percent

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Answer:

Among drivers and front-seat passengers, seat belts reduce the risk of death by 45%, and cut the risk of serious injury by 50%. Seat belts prevent drivers and passengers from being ejected during a crash. People not wearing a seat belt are 30 times more likely to be ejected from a vehicle during a crash.

What does the underlined word mean in the following sentence? Pido prestado dinero de mi madre cuando voy de compras. I lend I owe I borrow I pay.

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The answer is “I borrow”

Answer: C. I Borrow!

Explanation: On Edge!

According to the article, why was Wiesel's novel "Night" important to the world?

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Answer:

Wiesel's novel "Night" is important to the world because it shows that the Holocaust happened to individuals, not to a mass of strangers. It has changed the way the world conceives of genocide by putting a face and a name to such terrible suffering. But it also shows the beauty in the broken: the fact that Wiesel survived and got a chance to write this story to spread awareness.

Explain Mr. Browne's September Precept.

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Answer:

Mr. Browne's September precept is “when given the choice between being right and being kind, CHOOSE KIND”.

5. A: What ............................ in the photography club? B: At least, students should .................. a digital camera. *
A. needs / brings
B. is needing / bring
C. is needed / brought
D. are needed / brought
E. is needed / bring

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Answer:

E. is needed/bring

Explanation:

Answer:

Answer E,is needed / bring

Explanation:

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The Receiver has to hold all the painful, terrible memories so that

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Answer:

It's the first one (So he can gain wisdom and give advice when needed.)

Explanation:

Because if he doesn't give advice to those in need then they will end up making mistakes that lead up to these memories.

Answer:

everybody else does not have to experience/have the memories.

If you could save just one item from a disaster, what would it be?
Describe this item and explain why you treasure it. Was it a gift or something
you bought for yourself? How does that make it even more important to you?

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Answer:

a gift

Explanation:

from my fiancee thus important to me

Write a note on the role of matured individuals, family members and the community in protecting the rights of the childrens.​

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Answer:

The law must protect children's privacy, family, home, communications and reputation

Explanation:

symbolic significance of Indian national flag write a essay on it up to 120 words .... help meee​

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Answer:

The Indian national flag contains three colours and thus also called as the Tiranga.  Our national flag teaches us the lesson of unity, peace and humanity. It helps us to believe in the truth and unity. It is hoisted every year by the Indian prime Minister of India on 15th of August and by the President of India on 26th of January. However, it is hoisted by both of them at Red Fort followed by address to people of India. Our national flag is made up of khadi clothe, a hand-made clothe initiated by the Mahatma Gandhi. It is strictly prohibited in our country to fly a national flag made up of clothe other than Khadi. The national flag teaches us the lesson of unity, peace and humanity. It helps us to believe in the truth and unity. It is hoisted every year by the Indian prime Minister of India on 15th of August and by the President of India on 26th of January. However, it is hoisted by both of them at Red Fort followed by address to people of India. Our national flag is made up of khadi clothe, a hand-made clothe initiated by the Mahatma Gandhi. It is strictly prohibited in our country to fly a national flag made up of clothe other than Khadi.

Explanation:

Source 1 Pitts' Flash Mob Robberies article
Topic sentence 1 What does this article show about mob mentality?

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According to the article, the Mob mentality is created by detachment from the social alliance.

We can arrive at this answer because:

The article shows how Mob Robberies has become a common practice and has been carried out by groups of people who have no financial and social justification for it.This is because the mob has revealed a pattern of behavior among individuals, which completely breaks the social alliance that exists within the population.This social alliance affirms that there are rules that must be followed for the whole society to benefit from it.One of these rules is that theft must not be practiced.

However, with the events we are living through, with political leaders being controversial, racist events in society, and an intense reversal of values, this social alliance has been completely destroyed, people have questioned the need for rules and have broken them as a form of rebellion.

These feelings have passed from one person to another, which has resulted in the creation of Mob Robberies.

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Can someone help me with this please.

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Answer:

Here's some reasons (down below).

Explanation:

For one of your reasons, you could say that masks reduce the risks of getting C19, and those who do not wear masks may spread C19 quicker. Masks protect people from the risk of germs and stop the spread of C19 if you were infected (because you'll be the only one coming in contact with your sneezes and coughs, for example.)

The border shown on the map was jagged and _____

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Answer:

unprofessional

Explanation:

Bad bad bad bad bad not good

What were the two possessions of the James Dillingham Youngs in which they both took a mighty pride?
A. James' auto shop business and Della's cooking ability
B. James' golden cuff links and Delilah's Gucci purse.
O C. Jim's pocket watch ind Della's long hair.
O D. Jim's black tuxedo and Della's jewelry collection

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Answer:

Jim, s pocket tuxedo and dellab, s jewelry collection

2. What does the leash symbolize? Why does the child assume it is a stray, rather than
separated from its owner?

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On a symbolic level, he represents a man recently freed from the chains of slavery (his dragging leash). He seems lost with his new-found freedom, tripping over the leash, still in the mentality of slavery. He tries to befriend the Child, who drags him home, where bad things will happen.

The dark brown dog enters the story, symbolizing a former slave. The little brown dog is introduced with a rope around his neck, symbolizing the former slavery he had recently been freed of.

write a summary of Macbeth act 5 in one paragraph​

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Answer:

A messenger enters with astonishing news: the trees of Birnam Wood are advancing toward Dunsinane. Enraged and terrified, Macbeth recalls the prophecy that said he could not die till Birnam Wood moved to Dunsinane. Resignedly, he declares that he is tired of the sun and that at least he will die fighting.

Explanation:

hi to all of you lovely people! i just wanted to leave this to whoever sees it to say im proud of you, remember to eat and hydrate today! you got this, you matter, you exist, just keep on pushing through! love you :]

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Answer:

Super cute but are you a boy or girl also thx for the points

Explanation:

Read the excerpt from Martin Luther King Jr.’s "I Have a Dream” speech.

But one hundred years later, the Negro still is not free. One hundred years later, the life of the Negro is still sadly crippled by the manacles of segregation and the chains of discrimination. One hundred years later, the Negro lives on a lonely island of poverty in the midst of a vast ocean of material prosperity. One hundred years later, the Negro is still languished in the corners of American society.

Which are examples of metaphors in this excerpt of King’s speech? Select 4 options.

“the life of the Negro”
“manacles of segregation”
“chains of discrimination”
“one hundred years later”
“lonely island of poverty”
“ocean of material prosperity”

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We can actually deduce here that the examples of metaphors in this excerpt of King’s speech are:

"the life of the Negro"“manacles of segregation”"lonely island of poverty”“ocean of material prosperity”

What is metaphor?

Metaphor is actually known to be a figure of speech that is actually used to compare two things. It doesn't use "as" or "like" in its comparison.

We see here that the above selected options are examples of metaphor. They are compared to something. For example, poverty is compared to a lonely island.

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Helen Keller was awarded honorary degrees from multiple universities. Until her death in 1968, she was admired around the world for her perseverance and strength. â€""Helen's Story," hkelleronline. Org The source is a website with no known author and no page numbers. Add the correct internal citation at the end of the quote. "Until her death in 1968, she was admired around the world for her perseverance and strength".

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Answer:

What is the question?

Explanation:

Which MOST ACCURATELY identifies the relationship between the rights to vote for African Americans and for women? A) Women and African Americans were extended the right to vote in the same year. Eliminate B) Women were not extended the right to vote until after African Americans. C) Women were extended the right to vote before African American males. D) Women were not extended the right to vote until after African American males.

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Answer:

D) Women were not extended the right to vote until after African American males.

Explanation:

The 15th amendment(ratified in 1870) extended the right to vote for all men including African Americans. But the 19th(ratified in 1920) which gave all women the right to vote, came after.

What are some consequences of sleep deprivation for adolescents? Begin your answer with: Some consequences of sleep deprivation for adolescents are ________________________

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Lack of energy, if I understand your question
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