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It is a comma splice and needs a conjunction. Hope this helps.

Please Help With All of them Its from hatchet btw

One of the many things that authors have to consider when writing is the audience they are writing for. The author may use specific techniques to interest a particular audience, or shape their writing to ensure that their specific audience will understand the main ideas. For example, if you were writing an instruction manual for rocket scientists, it would likely look very different from one you would write for young children. Your language, tone, and writing style would change significantly.

You will be writing two separate paragraphs in this journal entry, each intended for a very different audience. Imagine you have been asked to write a paragraph about something you can do to improve your school or community. First, write the paragraph imagining that the readers of the paragraph will be first- and second-graders at the local elementary school. Then, revise the paragraph, this time writing it for an audience of political repesentatives in your city.

Your response should be no less than 150 words in total, and must include both versions of the paragraph.

Read the story.

Racing to Race

Carlo stopped to rest for a minute and tried to catch his breath. He’d been running for so long that he had pains in his side and his legs were beginning to hurt. He hunched over and tried to expand his lungs, but it was like trying to suck air out of a bicycle tire. His body was too exhausted to even allow him to take a deep breath, and he started to wheeze again.

“Great,” he thought, “let me just add asthma to my expanding list of ailments. I can’t believe that I can’t even jog two miles without completely collapsing!” He finally gave in to his aching body and laid down on the grass to recuperate. He closed his eyes and tried to imagine himself running on the school track in the 1,600-meter race. He pictured himself running steadily toward the finish line, running effortlessly like a cheetah in the jungle. He was so lost in thought that he didn’t even hear Meiya approach.

“Hey sleepyhead, what are you doing napping on Sean’s lawn in the middle of the day?” Meiya asked playfully.

Carlo quickly sat up, breathing normally now and feeling a little embarrassed. “I am trying to get in shape to try out for track, but I can’t even run two miles,” he said dejectedly.

“Wait, how many months are you out of surgery? Didn’t you just finish rehab last week?” Meiya asked. “You can’t expect to run two miles the first day.”

It had been six months since Carlo’s surgery and he specifically remembered the doctor telling him he could start running after six months. But he thought about what Meiya had said and realized she had a good point. After his surgery, the doctor did say rehab would be crucial to his recovery but that it would take time for him to gain back full use of his leg. He thought about how a baby had to learn to walk before it could run. He remembered when his nephew was learning to crawl; within days it seemed like he was walking. Running didn’t come right away, Carlo remembered. He realized it was the same with his therapy. The maximum he had run in the past month was one mile on the treadmill, so he realized that Meiya was probably right. He would have to work at building up his endurance and set more realistic goals for himself. As he thought about what he had already accomplished, he started to smile and felt like a weight was being lifted off his shoulders. He realized that he had run almost a mile and a half before his body started to protest and if he kept working hard, he could get back to where he was before his accident.

“Since when did you get so smart, Dr. Meiya?” he teased. “Do you want to race to the next mailbox?”

“You’re on!” she challenged and took off running at full speed.
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Part A

What is a central theme of “Racing to Race?”


A. Hard work and patience will eventually pay off.

B. Exercise can help heal a person’s physical body.

C. Perseverance is something that is difficult to achieve.

D. When people work together, they can accomplish more.
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Question 2

Part B

Which statement best shows how the theme identified in Part A is developed in the story?


A. Carlo pictures himself winning a big race on the school track team; when he realizes that he may not be able to run, he is very discouraged and disappointed.

B. Meiya knows that she is faster than Carlo, so she does her best to encourage him and also lets him win a race between them to boost his spirits.

C. Carlo is impatient about his ability to train for track tryouts, but after his conversation with Meiya, he realizes it will take time and work to heal his injury and fully recover.

D. Carlo realizes that he may not be able to compete on the school track team but also discovers that, with time, he will still be able to participate in a sport he loves.

PLZZZZZZZZZZ HELP ASAP
ABC Order and Definitions

1.React

2.Shift

3.Specify

4.Thesis

5.audience

6.format

7.purpose

8.introduction

9.focus

10.conclusion
11.influence

12.fleeting

13.mentorship

14.normal

15.participate

16.positive

17.circumstantial

18.emotional
19.contagion

20.fleeting




Extra Credit
Write down 45 affixes containing the sufffix:
-or
-ment
-ness

What is the best way to think about setting?

a. The mood and feeling of the story’s surroundings
b. The location where a story takes place
c. The time when a story takes place
d. All of the above

had poes short story been set in a different time period, do you think the story would have been as effective? explain in a 100-word essay
im talking about edgar allan poes short story about the spanish inquisition btw

Read the passage.
Our visit to New Mexico was great. Watching the sun rise over the desert is one of the greatest memories I have from any vacation. Taos, a small town that is nestled among soaring mountains, was my favorite place to visit. Skiing constantly, we flew down the sides of mountains for most of our vacation.

Which group of words from the passage is a participial phrase?

a. Watching the sun rise
b. flew down the sides of mountains
c. Skiing constantly
d. nestled among soaring mountains

SOMEONE QUICK PLEASE

I NEED RIDDLES FOR MY ELA HW

When you are reading a story, how can you tell WHEN something is happening? A) In a story, everything happens in the present. B) Unless the setting and time are stated, you cannot tell. C) You can tell by paying attention to verb tenses. D) It is always the past; otherwise, you couldn’t be reading it yet.

Which word is a synonym of deficient? HELP ME PLZ!!!!!!!

Vocabulary in Context: “Big Henryk was holding Kuba upside down by his ankles while Ferdi walloped Kuba’s rump with a big bone, one of many that were lying around”. Based on the context clues, what does wallop most likely mean? A.Tickle B.Strike C.Slice D.Scrape

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Part A

In "Can Eating Less Meat Cool the Climate?" What advice would the author of, “CON: Don't blame farm animals for all those greenhouse gas emissions” most likely give based on their viewpoint in the article?

One should seek alternative sources of protein.

One should continue to eat meat as a part of a healthy, balanced diet.

One should consider eating more fish or living a pescatarian lifestyle.

One should consider raising their own cattle and growing their own produce as small farms are more sustainable.

Question 2

Part B

Which evidence from the poem best supports the answer in Part A?

"For instance, growing almonds, a darling of health food fans, requires a huge amount of water."

" However, it underscores a major point: meat is a highly efficient source of nourishment — and tasty too.

"It is one thing to push vegetarian diets on the basis of health claims or animal rights. The environmental case against meat is a stretch, however."

"They found that a shift toward eating more fruits and vegetables and less meat would increase greenhouse gas emissions by 6 percent."

Reread this excerpt from Sidney’s “Astrophil and Stella, Sonnet 19,” keeping in mind the theme: “people in love will continue loving, even if it makes them seem foolish.”
Select the two groups of lines that show the turn, or volta, in the sonnet.
When most I glory, then I feel most shame:
I willing run, yet while I run, repent.

My best wits still their own disgrace invent:
My very ink turns straight to Stella's name;

And yet my words, as them my pen doth frame,
Advise themselves that they are vainly spent.

For though she pass all things, yet what is all
That unto me, who fare like him that both
Looks to the skies and in a ditch doth fall?

Oh let me prop my mind, yet in his growth,
And not in Nature, for best fruits unfit:
"Scholar," saith Love, "bend hitherward your wit."
Who ever answers this question may deserve 100 points and 1 brainliest point on my next question due to scammer -.- but you gotta be super fast.

Which multimedia and interactive elements do you think would best support your viewpoint on the topic you chose for your blog? Write two to four sentences explaining what multimedia and interactivity you will use and why.

Helen Keller was awarded honorary degrees from multiple universities. Until her death in 1968, she was admired around the world for her perseverance and strength.

—“Helen's Story,”

hkelleronline.org



The source is a website with no known author and no page numbers. Add the correct internal citation at the end of the quote.


"Until her death in 1968, she was admired around the world for her perseverance and strength" _________.

What goes in the blank. 4 options are given.

Option A: (Keller #)

Option B: (hkelleronline.org)

Option C: (Keller)

Option D: (“Helen’s Story”).

According to both passages, in which two ways do most Americans' breakfast preferences differ from the rest of the world?

Passage 1

Breakfast in America

In America, breakfast is the only meal that is still eaten at home by most of the population. About 80% of Americans eat the first meal of the day at home. The other 20% of people either skip breakfast or buy their morning meal outside of the home.
Most Americans eat dry cereal with milk for breakfast. Fruit juices, such as orange juice and apple juice, are common breakfast drinks. Eggs, with or without bacon, are the second most common morning meal. Bagels, muffins, and pastries are eaten less often than cereal and eggs.
The breakfast trends in America are changing, though. While cereal is still the most popular breakfast food, its sales have started declining sharply in the last few years. Instead, more Americans are reaching for portable breakfast items, like yogurt and sandwiches. Many people who eat breakfast want a satisfying meal without a lot of added sugar. Breakfast items rising in popularity are higher in fiber and protein than dry cereal.
A typical "All-American Breakfast" on the menu at restaurants might include eggs, bacon, ham, toast, potatoes, and coffee. However, most Americans are eating a lot less food in the mornings. They are also on the lookout for breakfast items that are easy to prepare and easy to carry.

Passage 2

What's for Breakfast?

The nutrients you eat in the morning help give your body energy all day long. In the United States, like in some other countries, cereal in milk is a popular breakfast food. However, unlike the United States, many other countries include seafood, meats, and vegetables in their morning meal.
All over the world, people eat foods for breakfasts that most people in the United States would save for later meals or not eat at all. In Japan, miso soup, white rice, squash with soy sauce, and grilled salmon are part of a common breakfast. In both Brazil and Germany, large pieces of bread served with cheese and meat, such as ham and sausage, make up the morning meal. In China, breakfasts vary greatly by region.
Dim sum, which is made up of small plates of food such as dumplings and marinated meat, is one traditional breakfast option in the large country. A soup made of egg, milk, and green onions is a morning staple in Columbia. In Nigeria, moi moi, which is a paste made of ground beans, is wrapped in leaves and steamed for breakfast. In both Australia and France, breakfast cereals served with fruit and bread are common for breakfast. In Turkey, small plates of many items, such as tomato slices, olives, bread, cheese, eggs, cucumbers, jam, honey, and sausage, make up breakfast.
Though breakfasts around the world look different, they all serve the same purpose—to satisfy your hunger, at least until lunch!

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Which of these is an example of the kind of claim that would go in an opinion essay?
Fables are boring because it’s too hard to believe that animals would act like human beings.
Fables were used by older cultures to teach children how to get along with other people.
Fables are more fun to read than other stories because animals make interesting characters.
Fables could be used in preschool to teach students how to make good choices.

I really don't think it's A.

Which word is a synonym of bestow? HELPPPP MEEEE PLZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!

which word in this sentence is a correlative conjuction

in counting by 7s 1. counting by sevens what did Willows evaluation Reveal 2. Name one thing Willow disliked about kindergarten 3. What type of sickness is Willow most interested in 4. What are three reasons willow leaves the house

select all that apply
How do we know that some pattern, rhythm, or meter was present in some of the Psalms?

Many psalms were sung.
The first line of the Psalm states the pattern.
Many musical words and notes are used in the psalms.
Rhythm is detected when a psalm is read aloud.

In the book "Out of my mind", What chapter is the Whiz Kids Game show? ( Help would be very appreciated as I've been looking for this awnser for 20 minutes) ​

Which sentence is the correct punctuation usage of the semicolon, colon, or comma?

A
He was a world class athlete, a rowing champion.

B
He was a world class athlete a rowing, champion.

C
He was a world class athlete: a rowing champion.

D
He was a world class athlete; a rowing champion.

select all that apply. Why does the structure of the Hebrew language make the recognition of patterns and meter difficult?

No vowels were written in the Hebrew language.
No consonants were written in the Hebrew language.
We are not sure how to pronounce the Hebrew words.
The language does not have any patterns or meter.

Plese help! Read the excerpt below and answer the question.

“Well,” he says, “there’s excuse for picks and letting-on, in a case like this; if it warn’t so, I wouldn’t approve of it, nor I wouldn’t stand by and see the rules broke—because right is right, and wrong is wrong, and a body ain’t got no business doing wrong when he ain’t ignorant and knows better. It might answer for you to dig Jim out with a pick, without any letting-on, because you don’t know no better; but it wouldn’t for me, because I do know better.”

The meaning in this excerpt is _____.

explicit
inferred
connoted
implicit

Help Needed!!! Traveling the Natchez Trace could be very dangerous during the early part of our state’s history. Discuss the dangers of traveling the Natchez Trace.

which sentence uses correct subject verb agreement?

Using the information in the following passage, describe how point of view helps create suspense for the reader.(PLEASE HELP! ill give brainliest

Passage
Maya disliked the desert because she was afraid of snakes. She had only agreed to go hiking because her friend Melissa had guaranteed they wouldn't come across any snakes. But even with her friend's promises, instead of enjoying the scenery, Maya was scanning the desert floor for any sign of movement.

"Maya, quit staring at the ground and look at this awesome view," said Melissa, thinking that Maya was being a baby and there was nothing to worry about. Maya knew that Melissa was right, so she tried to relax and enjoy their hike.

Deep in conversation, neither girl heard the rattle of the snake hidden on the trail up ahead.

Find the following verse in the Book of Psalms. Study the verse and write the synthetic parallel that the verse uses.

Psalm 111:1

List three character aspects about the Flop that hated Misha.

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